The Looking Glass Wars by Frank Beddor
Princess
Alyss Heart’s parents have been murdered by her aunt Redd, who wants to be
Queen of Wonderland. As Alyss travels
through a maze of mirrors, she encounters her dead parents who give her
encouragement and confirm their love for her.
Now they have to leave.
But Genevieve and Nolan kept walking.
“Wa-ait! Will I ever see you again?”
They stopped, apparently surprised by the question.
“Again and again and again,” said Nolan.
“If you know where to look for us,” said Genevieve.
Then they were gone and Alyss’ reflection once again occupied the glass. All strength left the princess. She fell to her knees and buried her face in her hands.
Beddor
uses the exit to create a bittersweet moment here. Alyss regains her parents, only to lose them
a second time. She might see them again
if she can figure out how, but that secret has departed with her parents. They’ve gone through the looking glass (the
door) and it has closed behind them—Alyss sees her reflection rather than an
empty mirror.
Beddor
could have had Alyss simply remember her parents, but that would have been a
stagnant scene with no movement or tension, and would have created little
emotion. He also could have left the
door open after Alyss sees her parents vanish in the distance, but that would
have offered up some hope. Closing the
door makes the situation seem hopeless and dark. Alyss’ situation becomes a bit more
complicated.
Here, in A single Shard by Linda Sue Park, the
author hits us with a double exit. This
is not a big moment, but Park makes the most of it. Tree-ear, the MC, is leaving Min, the potter,
to cut wood. He was hoping he’d get to
stay and watch the potter create something.
Exit
number one is Tree-ear leaving. You can
feel his disappointment in that sigh and in his turning back. Park doesn’t have to say he’s
disappointed. She could have moved on
from there and had Tree-ear get his firewood.
The first two sentences are serviceable and would have done the
job. But by adding that third sentence,
we learn that Tree-ear cares enough about the potter to say goodbye, even
though he will be returning soon, and that the potter doesn’t think much of
Tree-ear and cares little for him.
In Tender Morsels, author Margo Lanagan, gives
us a scene of fourteen year-old Liga having a baby. This is her second child, both by her father,
who keeps her hidden away so people won’t know what’s going on. The first time, she had no idea what was
happening to her and gave birth all alone to a dead, misshapen thing out in the
snow. This time, she realizes it’s a
baby, and underneath her fear and the pain of childbirth, there is joy and
excitement. The baby will be someone she
can love, someone else in the house who isn’t Da. But the baby is born dead, and Da has just
walked in, asking her if she’s done yet.
“Give it here,” he said, disgustedly, coming at
her big and heavy, alive and full of will.
He took the baby and went to turn away with it, but the cord dragged it
off his hands.
She caught it.
“It’s still attached,” she said.
She was beginning to shake hard.
“Well, cut it, cut it!”
She thought he meant her to cut up the
child. “It is already dead.”
“Oh, you!”
He swung from foot to foot in his exasperation. “Don’t you look at it. Give it to me. Don’t you go getting moonmoody on me; don’t
imagine this is anything more than you bleed out every month.” He took it again, more careful this time, and
tried to interpose his shoulder between her face and his hands.
“Is that all of it?” he almost shouted, clawing
for it, the child held like waste meat in his other hand, its head preoccupied
with its ancient thoughts.
And then he was gone, taking everything dripping
with him, and Liga was too glad to be rid of him to do more than kneel there, a
drizzling mess, and stare at the fact that it was over, stare at the messed
floor.
Lanagan
has shown Da as a horrible man, and this horrible man could have tossed the
dead baby out the window or into the fire and it would have been believable
given his character. But all that would
have done was make him more horrible and keep the tension high. And Liga would still be trapped in that house
with him.
This,
however was a long, somewhat graphic scene where the tension was kept at a high
level for some time. By the end of the
scene, the reader has pretty much had enough, so having Da leave not only
brings a bit of relief to Liga, but to the reader as well. It gives both Liga, and the reader, a chance
to breathe.
1 comment:
You always give so much to think on, Barb. Thank you!
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